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My mind's a train wreck
when I feel your kiss
A sugar
so sinful
accumulating from
butterscotch lips
©2004-2009 ~CandyChaos
:iconcandychaos:

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I am in a cutesy mood. So I decided to make a poem that when you read it you'd think "Wow, this could be the lyrics to a J-pop song!"

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:iconchibigiggles:
this is cute and could be a nice chorus. ^_^

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" I can resist everything BUT temptation "
:iconbeck-carter:
Yeah, it could be in a chorus of a song! :nod:

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>>Insert something witty here<<
:iconameagari:
this is so nice!! Absolutely lovely. Do write more poetry.
i'm interested in composing melodies and perhaps if the sentences are longer, it could be made into a song :heart:

God bless you with rainbows,
quartz ^_^

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August 20, 2004
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